The example of Argumentative Paragraph

Topic Sentence: Government should increase the salary of Indonesian House of Representative members.

Contra: It is not wise to increase the salary of them because there are a lot of poor people in this country.

Attack: The contra is totally right, but there are also some reasons to improve the prosperity of them.

Pros:
1. When the prosperity and salary are enough, the tendency of being a corruptor would be lower.
2. They need an appreciation for the big responsibility as representatives.
3. To accommodate public’s aspiration in rural area, it needs extra money.

Conclusion: For those reasons, government needs to increase the salary of representatives in order to improve their work.

Final Draft

During the economy global crisis, Government should increase the salary of Indonesian House of Representative members. People who disagree with that proposal believe that it is not wise to increase the salary of them because there are a lot of poor people in this country. It is undeniable fact that is really happening, but there are also some reasons to improve the prosperity of Indonesian Representatives. Logically, when the prosperity and salary are enough, the tendency of being a corruptor would be lower. As we know, the sallary is already much enough, but there are so many things that can tempt them to abuse their authority. Moreover, they need an appreciation for the big responsibility as representatives. Hard work and full dedication are highly demanded from them. Last, to accommodate public’s aspiration in rural area, it needs extra money. Indonesia’s area is very large and consist of many islands. They need to going by plane and hotel accommodation when meet people in remote places. For those reasons, government needs to increase the salary of representatives in order to improve their work.

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